27/03/2014

I performed my monologue again this week and got some feedback on it.  Kirstie suggested I make the boyfriend's voice more distinct from Beryl's, so I think I'll pitch my voice deeper next time. Also for the line, 'Sometimes I just want to jump down a deep hole and forget it. Only I know that bastard’ll be waiting at the bottom. Waiting to thump the life out of me.' which I tried to make emotional, Kirstie suggested that instead I could try saying that line very blankly and almost without emotion. I think this would work well as it would give more of a sense of depression and numbness to the character, which would fit her situation well.